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James (HVR)'s avatar

This was haunting.

And worth it!

Eliseo F.G. McCarthy's avatar

Thank you so much!

I always write to please myself first, I'm glad it has the same effect on you! 😄

Hai Dang's avatar

Having peace with self is also a crownless king. There's no noise anymore, just self and peace. Thank you for sharing this.

Eliseo F.G. McCarthy's avatar

This is actually a really interesting and unique thought on this poem, I never really thought of it as a peaceful thing, but I do like that interpretation of it!

Kelly Trost's avatar

Hello Eliseo, this is a beautifully written poem. I am so glad I read it at this precise time. It is very inspiring.

Eliseo F.G. McCarthy's avatar

Thank you so much!

I always hope that my works find the right person at the right time, I'm glad it was able to do that for you!

Kelly Trost's avatar

Hello Eliseo, you’re welcome. Reading you was a pleasure!

Eliseo F.G. McCarthy's avatar

That means so much to me!

Kelly Trost's avatar

I’m so glad. You are a wonderful writer.

Parker McCoy's avatar

He sounds determined and a bit...mad. Hehe. Nice post, Eliseo.

Eliseo F.G. McCarthy's avatar

Hey thanks!

I suppose he is a bit crazy, yeah!